Finished chapter 25; 51817 word count
Writing Tip: Occasionally similar words will show up in a sentence and although they are not incorrect, they have an awkward sound to them. (One of the reasons for reading your work aloud.)
Original: He didn't want her to think he thought she was oddly dressed.
Revised:
He didn’t need her to misconstrue his opinion. Effie wore odd combinations, but she managed to look comfortable, not self-conscious.
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Mrs. Paul is a fantasy author and grandma. 
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