Working on chapter four; 6018 word count
Writing tip: Parallel construction just means that like verbs must be presented in like manner.
Example: A little breeze kicked up, and the mist swirled and eddied, clearing in some patches and stretched thin across others.
A little breeze kicked up, and the mist swirled and eddied, clearing in some patches and stretching thin across others.
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