Saturday, February 6, 2010

Rewriting for imagery

Finished Ch. 50; 88,423 word count

Writing Tip: Evolution of a sentence:

The dark night whispered with chilly breezes.
Chilly breezes whispered in the dark night.
Chilly breezes whispered among the nearby bushes.
Chilly breezes whispered among huddled bushes.

4 comments:

  1. ooh. Love this. Is the book done? Was trying to find the counter you talked about!

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  2. Counter? Do you mean the first line of the blog where I put the chapter I'm working on and the current word count?

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  3. I do so much love your blog. Your tips are wonderful!

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  4. I love your books soooo much!!! When do you think you will be donr with the next one?

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