Writer's tip:
One pattern of humor is two straight sentences and then the unexpected twist.
Example:
My dog chews leather shoes.
Old ones?
No, I think the mailman's shoes are new.
I can't give you the exact sentences from chapter 21 one where I used this pattern. It would give too much away. It did involve a sword and a nightshirt.
Mrs. Paul is a fantasy author and grandma. 
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Flynn loves humor that involves an unexpected twist!
ReplyDeleteI like it! Thanks for the tip!
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A sword and a nightshirt? That should be interesting! I love humor, a good laugh can be a real blessing!
ReplyDeleteDitto Jenna. I can't wait to hear how that turns out.
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