finished chapter 48; 85,597 word count
Writing Tip: When I present myself with a string of prepositional phrases, I know it is time to reword.
She tasted the breeze as well as luxuriated in the brush of warm wisps of breath on her skin.
Four prepositional phrases in a row are too many. Three is pushing the limit. This is the way I rewrote the sentence:
She tasted the breeze as well as luxuriated in the brush of warm breath-like wisps on her skin.
All on its own, it looks a little like purple prose, but since it is in Hollee's POV and she is rather flamboyant, it works.
Purple prose = overdone style, usually in descriptions.