Writing tip: Give your characters something to do while they talk. This breaks up long strings of dialog and reminds the reader of the setting while the conversation is taking place.
The commander decided not to take a chance. "First, don't do it right outside of town. Second, don't leave any witnesses."
Kulson nodded and continued with his meal. Groddenmitersay lifted his empty tankard as a server went by. He needed a drink.
Mrs. Paul is a fantasy author and grandma. 
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Good tip. We often forget that.
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